高考英语读后感专题13 读后续写句子改写之无灵主语

专题13读后续写句子提升思维之无灵主语一、读后续写中无灵主语的运用赏析:EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.“WhyisLee’swatchonyourwrist?”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleverybodyaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.[70words]Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.[80words]好句式学习：Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.形容词作状语，精简高级。后文还有：Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。形容词dead修饰微妙，恰到好处。包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语：Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andeven...ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.完全倒装，高级句式。类似的还有：Then的完全倒装：Thechairmancamethen=>Thencamethechairman.Computerwasusedinteachingthen=>Thencomputerwasusedinteaching.衔接词however的使用，让上下文语义衔接自然。复合形容词well-prepared的使用。分词作状语的使用：However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.高级词汇和语块的使用：madearequestinatoneofbegging，madeherwayto，witheveryconfidence，noddedwithapproval，erupted等。Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.二、无灵主语概念以及用法举例（一）概念无灵主语（inanimatesubject），又叫做物称主语，指的是使用没有生命的事物充当句子的主语成分，例如物品、动作、情感、时间、地点等，这与中文表达中习惯“以人为本”的特点，即常常会把人这个行为主体作为句子主语的情况大相径庭，体现了英语语言所强调的客体思维。读后续写和概要写作中常用到无灵主语，如1.Nightapproaching,darknessruledtheforest.2.Anxietytore(撕裂)himintopieces.3.Angerchoked(哽咽)mywords.4.Despairtookholdofhim.5.Moreover, lesstimespentwithyoungerchildrenisattributedtoschoolreforms.6.Exposuretodifferentculturescanencouragecreativity.（二）句子改写（20例）1.Inthepastfouryears,ourproductionhasincreased.Thepastfouryearshaswitnessedanincreaseinproduction.（时间作主语）2.Atdusk,hewascryinginthestreet.Duskfoundhimcryinginthestreet3.Atdawn,thelittleboywasstillworking.Dawnsawthelittleboystillworking.4.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Views differfrompersontoperson.Opinionsvarygreatlyamongpeople.5.Hethoughtofhismotheranddidn’twanttoeat.Thethoughtofhismothermadehimlosehisappetite.Thethoughtofhismotherledtohislossofappetite.6.Shecouldn’tfallasleepthoughthejunglewassilent.Sleepdidn‘tvisitheralthoughthesilenceofadeadworldwasonthejungle.7.Wewalkedfortenminutesandgottothehotel.Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.8.Theywhisperedintheclassroom.Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom.9.Shebegantospeak.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.10.Theboywascryinginthestreetatdusk.Duskfoundtheboycryinginthestreetbecausehewashungry.11.Inthepastfouryears,ourproductionhasincreased.Thepastfouryearshaswitnessedanincreaseinproduction.（时间作主语）12.Manygreathistoriceventshappenedinthecity.Thecityhadwitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.（地点名词作主语）13.Theyspendlesstimewiththeirparentsbecauseofschoolreforms.Schoolreformsleadtolesstimespentwithparents.14.Peoplewithgoodhabitsareefficientwhilethosewithbadhabitsareinefficient.Goodhabitslead toefficiencywhile badonesbring the opposite.15.Ifyoucomparethetwomethodscarefully,youwillfindthedifference.Carefulcomparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.16.Hewasoptimisticjustnow,butnowheisdoubtful.Hisoptimismhasgivenwaytodoubt.他的乐观变成了怀疑。17.Weshouldconsider issuesofhealthandsafetycarefully.Carefulconsiderationshould begivento issuesofhealthandsafety. 18.Iforgothisnameatthemoment.Hisnameescaped/failedmeatthemoment.19.Ididn’tnoticethemistake.Themistakeslippedmyattention.20.Shechangedgreatlyaftertenyearsofhardwork.Tenyearsofhardworkchangedhergreatly.三、无灵主语的种类（一）主语是情感状态的抽象名词谓语选择如：creep,strike,seize,dawn,catch,worminto,grip,enter,register,overcome,takepossessionof,surround,givewayto,desert,pass,tear等词。1.Feargrippedthevillage.整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中。2.Couragedesertedhim.他没有了勇气。3.Hispresenceofminddesertedhim.他失去了沉着。4.Theearthquakestruckthevillagetwominutesago.5.Anewdignitycreptintohissteps.他走起路来，不知不觉添了几分尊严。6.Anxietytorehimintopieces.他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。7.Bynowoptimismhadgivenwaytodoubt.现在，乐观变成了怀疑。8.Angerchokedmywords.我气的说不出话。9.Astonishmentdeprivedmeofmypowerofspeech.我惊讶得说不出话来。10.Neithersorrownorregretfollowedmypassionateoutburst.我这样发作一通之后，既不难过，也不后悔。11.Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.他突然感到不寒而栗。12.Despairseizedhimatthethoughtofhersettingoutalonetorenewthewearyquestforwork.想起她一个人出去重新登上找工作的艰辛路途，他觉得万念俱灰。13.Angerandbitternesshadpreyeduponmecontinuallyforweeksandadeeplanguorhadsucceededthispassionatestruggle.几个星期以来，我又气又恨，感到非常苦恼，这种感情上的激励斗争过去之后，我感到浑身乏力。（二）主语是具有动词意味的名词，谓语选择如fill,give,make等词汇。1.Thesightofthedesolationfilledmewithforlornness.看到这孤寂的景象，我心中满是凄凉。2.Thesightofhisfather-in-lawmadeFanjinafraidthathewasinforanothercursing.见丈人