高考英语读后感【考前特训】06:友情亲情篇(人与社会)-2023年高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经

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【考前特训】06:友情亲情篇(人与社会)-2023年高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经典话题精选荟萃题源:1.(2023·湖南长沙·高三专题练习)2.(2023·浙江温州·高三阶段练习)3.(2023·河北衡水·校联考模拟预测)4.(2023·黑龙江大庆·统考三模)5.(2023·山东·潍坊一中校联考模拟预测)1.(2023·湖南长沙·高三专题练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnatraintoSmithville,amanhappenedtositdownnexttoayoungmannomorethan17yearsold.Becausetheboywastense,themanwonderedwhatcouldbeworryinghim.Whateveritwas,theboy’stensionwasclear.Theboykeptstaringoutofthewindow,payingnoattentiontoanyoneelseonthetrain.Themanopenedupabookandstartedreading.Nowandthen,hewouldlookupandseetheboy’sfacepressedagainstthewindow.Hesensedthattheboywasfightingtokeepfromcrying.Finally,theboyaskedtheman,“Doyouknowwhattimeitis?AnddoyouknowwhenwearetoarriveatSmithville?”Themangavetheboythetime.Thentheboytoldthemanthewholestoryofhislife.“Fouryearsago,”hesaid,“Ididsomethingbadhurtingmydad,sobadthatIhadtorunawayfromhome.Icouldn’tfacemyfather.SoIleftwithoutevensayinggoodbyetohim.Sincethen,Ihaveworkedhereandthere.Ineverstayedverylonginoneplace.I’vebeenprettylonely.Untilfinally,IdecidedthatIwanttogobacktomyfatherandapologizedtohim.”Themanwentontoask,“Doesyourfatherknowyou’recoming?”Andtheboyresponded,“HeknowsI’mcoming,butIdon’tknowifhewillbethere.Isenthimaletter.Ididn’tknowifhewouldstillwantmeback.Iwasn’tsureifhewouldforgiveme.Soinmyletter,Itoldhimthatifhewantedmetocomehome,hecouldputasignonatreewhichisafewhundredyardsbeforetherailroadstationinSmithville.ItoldhimthatIwouldlookforayellowribbon(丝带)ononeofthebranchesofthattreeasthetrainpasses.Ifthereisayellowribbononthetree,thenI’llgetoff.Ifnot,thenI’lljustkeeponridingtowhereverthistraingoes.”ThetwoofthemwerenowwaitingforSmithville.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Nowinvolved,themanstoppedreadingandalsostaredatthewindow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewmomentslater,theconductorcamealongandcalledout,“Nextstop-Smithville.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Nowinvolved,themanstoppedreadingandalsostaredatthewindow.However,afterawhile,theboy’sfaceturnedpale,seeminglyfeelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.Themannoticedthatandtriedtocomforttheboy.Hesaidgently,“Don’tworry.Whateverhappens,pleaserememberthatthereisalwayslightbehindtheclouds.”Afterhearinghiswords,theboyturnedhisheadandlookedathim.Themanadded,“I’mafather,too.Parentsarealwaysthereandneverletgooftheirchildren.”Theboynodded,eyesfullofhope.Paragraph2:Afewmomentslater,theconductorcamealongandcalledout,“Nextstop—Smithville.”Theboycouldnotmove.Theman,however,lookedashardashecould.Andthenhesawit!Heshoutedsoloudthatallthepeopleinthetrainturnedaround.“It’sthere!Look!Thetreeiscoveredwithyellowribbons!Notjustonethere’sawholebunch!”Thefatherhadeveryreasonnottoputupayellowribbonandyethedid.Onlyafatherwhoseloveisrealcouldblanketthetreewithyellowribbons,eachoneofthemproclaimingreconciliation.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,文章讲述了在开往史密斯维尔的火车上,一个男人注意到一个年青人显得很紧张。男人问年青人怎么了,年青人告诉男人四年前他做了伤害自己父亲的事,选择了离家出走。现在,年青人想回到父亲身边,他写信给父亲,如果父亲能原谅他的话,就在火车站附近的树上系上一条黄丝带。如果看到黄丝带,年青人就会下车。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“这时,这个男人停止了阅读,也盯着窗户。”可知,第一段可描写男人注意到男孩非常焦虑,于是开始安慰男孩。②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,列车员走过来,大声喊道:‘下一站——史密斯维尔。’”可知,第二段可描写史密斯维尔站到了,男孩紧张得不能动弹,这时男人发现了树上挂满了黄丝带。2.续写线索:男孩感到焦虑——男人安慰男孩——火车即将到站——发现满树的黄丝带3.词汇激活行为类①停止:stop/cease②注意到,察觉到:notice/observe③大喊,大叫:shout/cry/yell情绪类①温柔地:gently/softly/tenderly②希望,期盼:hope/expection【点睛】[高分句型1]Whateverhappens,pleaserememberthatthereisalwayslightbehindtheclouds.(运用了whatever引导让步状语从句和that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Heshoutedsoloudthatallthepeopleinthetrainturnedaround.(运用了that引导结果状语从句)[高分句型3]Onlyafatherwhoseloveisrealcouldblanketthetreewithyellowribbons,eachoneofthemproclaimingreconciliation.(运用了whose引导定语从句和独立主格结构)2.(2023·浙江温州·高三阶段练习)阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iputonelastboxintothebackseatandclosedthecardoor.ItfeltasifIwereclosingthedooronmywholelife.Atfirst,IwasexcitedwhenMomtoldmeshe’dgottenafantasticnewjobatananimalhospital.Then,becauseshealwayssavesthebadnewsforlast,shetoldmethereallyterriblepart.Thehospitalwasn’tinourcity;itwasmilesawayinthemiddleofnowhere.AndI’mdefinitelynotacountrygirl.Istoodbesidethecar,takingalastlookatourbuilding.Tomostpeople,itprobablyjustlookedlikeanyotheroldapartmenthouse,butIlovedeverybrick.Justthen,Isawmybestfriends,HanaandLeo,cometose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