专题06 读后续写（第2期）-2024届浙江高考英语模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

专题06读后续写（第2期）-2024届浙江高考英语模拟试题分项汇编读后续写【2024·浙江省杭州市高三上学期一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStalecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(顶点)ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd-tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal-toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】   However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals,Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinch,acrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarms.   Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid,“Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest.”Liftingmyface,Isawmydad’seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime,andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.Themileswehadruntogether,allforthisrace,flashedacrossmymind.“Butweworkedsohard.Whataboutourdream”Iasked.Inthatsecond,theworldstoodstill.Hereachedoverformyhand,holdingbackhisowntears,andsaid,“Don’tyouknowthatyouaremydreamcometrue”【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和父亲很期待自己能在高中最后一年的越野赛跑上获得好成绩，不料在比赛过程中，作者突然体力耗尽，虽然作者最后尽力越过终点，但是却没获得好成绩，作者觉得让父亲和大家失望了，父亲却说只要尽力了，就不会失望。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“然而，毫无征兆地，我的体力耗尽了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在体力耗尽的情况下，如何尽力跑过终点。②由第二段首句内容“我低声说：‘很抱歉让你失望了，爸爸。’”可知，第二段可描写作者父亲安慰作者并没有让他失望。2.续写线索：为比赛做准备——比赛开始——突然体力耗尽——努力跑过终点——觉得让父亲失望——父亲安慰3.词汇激活行为类①努力争取：fight/struggle②看见：see/catchsightof③摧毁：destroy/crush/ruin情绪类①羞愧：shame/embarrassment/humiliation②失望：disappoint/letdown【点睛】[高分句型1]Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.(when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Liftingmyface,Isawmydad’seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime,andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.(inwhich引导的非限制性定语从句和省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)读后续写【2024·浙江省金华市金华十校高三上学期一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Myfatherwasthekindofpersonwhocouldneverpassbysomeonewhoneededhelp.Hewasafirmbelieverinthemantra(箴言)：Whatgoesaroundcomesaround.Hebelievedthatsomedayhemightneedhelp,andsomeonewouldreturnthefavor.ButIdidn’tquitebuyit.Oneweekend,myfatherandItookatriptoFlamingGorgeReservoir(水库).WelovedtofishatFlamingGorge.Weownedacabinboatthatwasaboutfifteenfeetinlength.WeputourboatinatSheepCreekMarina(游艇停泊港).Ourgoalwastogoasfarnorthaspossible,spendtheweekendinourboat,andfishuntilwehadourlimit.HeadingtowardtheWyomingsideofthereservoir,wetraveledsomedistancebeforewebegantofish.Frankly,thefishingwasn’tverygood,butwelovedbeingoutontheboattogetherinsuchabeautifulplace.Suddenly,w