高考英语读后感专题09 读后续写之积极和消极写景烘托

专题09读后续写之积极和消极写景烘托一、关键词blow吹howl咆哮crash碰撞stir搅动darken使变黑envelope信封，包裹gloomy阴郁的dip蘸pour泼sunshine/sunlight阳光breeze微风dim昏暗的faint微弱的winding蜿蜒的frighten是某人害怕chilling寒冷的thunder雷，打雷lightening闪电frosty寒冷的melt融化二、常用短语bebathedin沐浴在amber-likesunshine琥珀色的阳光stretchoff延伸凉爽清新的风coolandrefreshingbreeze落日thesettingsunstrolldownthestreet在街上漫步thefirstrayofsunlight第一缕阳光floodinto涌入gentlebreeze微风多雨的季节arainyseason暴风雨之夜astormynight在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain在春天温暖的阳光里inthewarmspringsunshine难以忍受的热unbearablehot放晴了clearup木日光浴batheinthesunshine一个偏僻的小村庄asmallvillageoffthemap离海滨仅咫尺之遥bedottedwith点缀着三、各种场景描写片段赏析（一）阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悦的景色描写Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingtonothingness（虚无）,onlytore-emerge（重新出现）againonyourleft.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、点缀）theslope.风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.（二）暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung的原形为sting“叮咬”16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.叹息的声音17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧残),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）（三）烦闷焦躁的景色描写19.It’shotenoughtomelthell.天热得能融化地狱。20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。（四）凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的细雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）puffs（一阵阵小风）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活动的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉闷地）andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）. 消极与积极场景：（一）细节描述之“describeapeacefulscene”1. WhenI wasbathedin thesunlight,itfeltlike theamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.(沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤)2.Mist-coveredmountains weredottedwith smallfarmsandvillages.(点缀着)3. Thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlyby thegracefullywavingreeds. (优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)（二）细节描述之“describestormyweather”1. Theskyis overcast, darkenedwithgloomyclouds.(乌云密布；黑云压顶)2.Onthatdarkandstormynight, thewaves were crashingandthewindswerehowling. (海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮)3. Therain came pouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewand beatagainst thehouse.(暴风骤雨)（三）Goodsettingdescriptionforappreciation(佳“景”赏析)1.Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies. 2.Thesunkeptdippingdownintotheoceanandthelightscameonattheharbor,castingsuddenshadowsontheground,illuminatingthefacesthatwerejustasecondagosilhouettes.Theskywasgoldenandpurple,theoceanadarkershadeofviolet. 3.Thesunhadset,butafaintpastelhazelingeredinthemid-summersky.4.Theyrolledupthepath,treebranchesrakingthewindshieldlikeangrywardens.5.Outside,theairfilledwithcricketnoise,asthesunreddenedinitsdescent.6.ArestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomyimaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscriptfromthelateMiddleAges.7.Themoonwentslowlydowninloveliness;shedepartedintothedepthofthehorizon,andlongveil-likeshadowscreptuptheskythroughwhichthestarsappeared. 8.Allbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothing.Westeppedoutofthetentontonothing.Sledgeandtentwerethere,Estravenstoodbesideme,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadow.Therewasdulllightallaround,everywhere.Whenwewalkedonthecrispsnownoshadowshowedthefootprint.Weleftnotrack.Sledge,tent,himself,myself:nothingelseatall.Nosun,nosky,nohorizon,noworld.9.Nighthadfallen